Ensure that all the questions are on separate posts, with the evaluation questions.
Your analysis of question 2, demonstrates a basic understanding of how your ancillary texts work alongside your music video and this is because your have generalised your points and have not related to enough detailed examples throughout, which makes your analysis difficult to understand. Therefore, you need to ensure that you include images of your products, so that you can explore your choices and discussions further. You also need to elaborate on your ideas and inspirations that were generated from the group, in creating the final product.
Your analysis of question 3, demonstrates a basic understanding of why audience feedback is essential to receive and this is because you have not explored the feedback that you received in enough detail and the changes that you would like to implement. You have started to do this, but you need to elaborate on the points that you have made on adding extra scenes, to demonstrate further understanding of your target audience and feedback.
Your analysis of question 4, demonstrates a basic understanding of the various technologies that you used in your production and this is because the points that you have included are too basic and further analysis of the tools that you used is needed, by referring back to your products. You also need to focus more on the strengths and weaknesses further, to demonstrate further knowledge and understanding of how technology was used, throughout your productions.
Ensure that all the questions are on separate posts, with the evaluation questions.
ReplyDeleteYour analysis of question 2, demonstrates a basic understanding of how your ancillary texts work alongside your music video and this is because your have generalised your points and have not related to enough detailed examples throughout, which makes your analysis difficult to understand. Therefore, you need to ensure that you include images of your products, so that you can explore your choices and discussions further. You also need to elaborate on your ideas and inspirations that were generated from the group, in creating the final product.
Your analysis of question 3, demonstrates a basic understanding of why audience feedback is essential to receive and this is because you have not explored the feedback that you received in enough detail and the changes that you would like to implement. You have started to do this, but you need to elaborate on the points that you have made on adding extra scenes, to demonstrate further understanding of your target audience and feedback.
Your analysis of question 4, demonstrates a basic understanding of the various technologies that you used in your production and this is because the points that you have included are too basic and further analysis of the tools that you used is needed, by referring back to your products. You also need to focus more on the strengths and weaknesses further, to demonstrate further knowledge and understanding of how technology was used, throughout your productions.